tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2186359217419540644.post7582926415212298939..comments2024-03-06T18:09:20.079+08:00Comments on clash of the bull and the frog: how sleep can be definedBullfroghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06140314033223243441noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2186359217419540644.post-41029550585050789352010-10-14T18:22:30.255+08:002010-10-14T18:22:30.255+08:00Awesome poem.. I liked it.. Interesting this one.....Awesome poem.. I liked it.. Interesting this one..Electronic Cigaretteshttp://www.bestecigarettesreview.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2186359217419540644.post-9239081227688919882010-06-06T20:45:32.538+08:002010-06-06T20:45:32.538+08:00Sorry, sestina nga pala ito.
Erase ung comment na...Sorry, sestina nga pala ito. <br />Erase ung comment na weak ung last part. Haha!rhodgehttp://www.ghv2.tabulas.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2186359217419540644.post-43970431081889822932010-06-05T22:57:42.840+08:002010-06-05T22:57:42.840+08:00I-te-text ko kasi sana ung comments ko, kaya lang ...I-te-text ko kasi sana ung comments ko, kaya lang may tinakot pa akong bata... Nalimutan ko tuloy hehe. <br /><br />Ayun, may mga thought sa isang part na nabanggit na sa ibang part din. May parts na puwedeng pagsamahin para magka-impact lalo ung thought (Parts 1 and 2). <br /><br />I'm not sure pa if "progressive" ung thought per part, na pagdating sa huling part, parang boom! Unfortunately, the last part is weak since it served as a "summary" of the things talked about sa mga naunang bahagi. <br /><br />This poem can be tighten pa. <br /><br />Ayun, eto lang muna, Jordan! :)Rhodgehttp://www.ghv2.tabulas.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2186359217419540644.post-82667417584142009202010-06-05T12:00:22.486+08:002010-06-05T12:00:22.486+08:00Sobrang galing ng comment mo ah. So profound; it w...Sobrang galing ng comment mo ah. So profound; it would surely help me a lot when I revise the poem.Bullfroghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06140314033223243441noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2186359217419540644.post-43437305160000273532010-06-04T23:43:43.115+08:002010-06-04T23:43:43.115+08:00I likey!I likey!Rhodgehttp://www.ghv2.tabulas.comnoreply@blogger.com